Mother

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    Mother

    Amid the bustle and the heat,
    The hawkers and the deli meat,
    She appeared.

    Like an orchid amongst the daisies,
    with a rhythm all her own;
    the sun following her every step
    to glint like fervent copper in her hair.

    It seemed as if she bore
    An air of soothing coolness in her wake,
    That all who passed through that perfumed hallow
    Breathed air as pure as snow.

    And she smiled at her own thoughts;
    And meandered with ease through hectic crowds --
    A song in her throat,
    A swing in her step,
    A delicate flash of her ankle.

    Youth was strung across her shoulders
    And beauty like rouge upon her cheeks.
    She smiled as she reached for me,
    Whispering, "Darling."

    And I answered, "Mother." 

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    Madelynn commented on Mother

    01-22-2011

    WOW! This is absolutely amazing!! I was absent from OP for awhile- and boy, have I been missing out! What a heartfelt piece of pure beauty! I was caught on not only your scented words- but also your beautiful style of writing! This is gorgous!! 10!! Maddi

    Jammin

    01/24/2011

    Thank you!!!!!! I really took my time writing this one. Nothing beats finding out that someone else gets what I was trying to convey.

    A poem begins as a lump in the throat, a sense of wrong, a homesickness, a lovesickness. It finds the thought and the thought finds the words.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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