The Flame

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    This Poem is being published by Famous Poets in there new book Inkmaster
    (C) 2009

    The Flame

    The flames lick the fire

    with a hot sinful desire,

    They rise into the night

    Ready to take on a enchanted flight,

    As the wood cries alone

    And starts to take on a chard tone,

    I can hear the names of my friends

    Clawing at the hot brimstone again,

    The light keeps the darkness at bay

    And a phoenix rises up from the shame,

    The flames are rising higher and higher

    As the wood becomes the flames attire,

    The wood screams out its pain and mumbles

    A ancient name as the cremation is complete..

    Inkmaster…………….

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    knight4696 commented on The Flame

    12-02-2009

    Great Job Ink!!! Love the intense imagery and flow! ...Ken
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    inkmaster

    12/02/2009

    thanks.......inkmaster

    SavVySam commented on The Flame

    11-12-2009

    Wow...You are smokin hot in this piece! Great poem, great images and brevity for impact!! Loved it!
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    FranzJ commented on The Flame

    11-07-2009

    nice - being a retired firefighter i appericate it - i can feel flames and hear the burning as i read it
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    nature commented on The Flame

    10-31-2009

    Fire, this is an element I am all to familiar with, for my soul burns to ignite with it's pitch, in which I torch the existence, of my vessel I attach with, for all that burns must be a gift...well done inkmaster
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    PoetsofBlood commented on The Flame

    10-25-2009

    I love this , A ancient name as the cremation is complete.. thats my fav past, ;) Alexia
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    Poetry is when an emotion has found its thought and the thought has found words.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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