~on the slab~

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    ~on the slab~

     RE: POB Bleed for a Cause Volume 2 ~on the slab~

    Drawled and quartered laying on the slab,
    The tag on my toe is my only friend.
    Trapped inside this mortal flesh,
    Where death is no longer now a treasured wish.
    Eyes are fixed and clouding in,
    Hearing is fading as the flames roll in.
    My soul is restless as I lie and bake,
    Maybe my ashes might stain the gate.
    What was before can no longer ever be,
    What comes after my third eye begins to see.
    The blood runs deep through the sands of time,
    Only thing I have left is a tortured mind.
    I feel the brimstone as it incases me,
    The flames grow higher as they cremate me.
    ~inkmaster

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    Rhymer commented on ~on the slab~

    10-02-2010

    Excellent dark write, the spirtit trapped inside the body. Realizing the shell is being cremated, a haunting thought indeed..........10
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    inkmaster

    10/02/2010

    thanks a twisted tail...glad u liked it....jeff

    Teardrops commented on ~on the slab~

    10-02-2010

    This is something i think we all see once in awhile . I hope it is long comming for you dont like to lose friends love this poem Marie
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    angel33614 commented on ~on the slab~

    10-01-2010

    Twisted and deep write my new friend, bravo! The imagery you create is darn haunting as I can see the flesh dripping off your bones, I can hear the silent screams of your inner mind as it pleads for death's embrace to be set free, but the thing that really gets me is the smell as it lingers in the air of my mind and will surely follow me to bed, LOL. Great write, surely worthy of a true POB. The deeper meaning found beyound the flesh of one's bones is the illlusion of one's life, that our body and this mortal world is all that there is to know. The reaper comes for us all to cross the river sticks but not all of us are ready to ge willing, some retain the darkness of the night and wonder the lands of the lost. Perhaps I see, perhaps i am blind as a bat. Purity of the soul, journey well!!! with grace and humility ANGEL of darkness- POB for life! We are the poets of blood, our pens bleed words, our hearts bleed emotion, and our souls bleed for a cause...
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    inkmaster

    10/02/2010

    very well put...thanks for the comment...most of the time I live a world filled with pain from bad karma that always comes back to meet me from my past...Yes had a very colorful past and interesting life so far but sometimes I feel that I have seen too much on this rock we call home...I dig your work I also am a artist when not scribbling out my criptic insanity..lol..My medium is staining the flesh though have a degree in fine art go figure ha..lol..take care and thanks for the comment I will write come goth for POB this week if I find time....Nice to meet you....Jeff AKA Inkmaster

    Musicmynded1 commented on ~on the slab~

    10-01-2010

    oh.. the first to rate... hmmm.. ive read a few of urs in the past and must say i enjoy the reads.. always good descriptives.
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    inkmaster

    10/01/2010

    thanks for the comment.....inkmaster

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