Imagination SOS

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  • Dreams

    Imagination SOS

    diaphanous dreams cling to

    the edges of sleep,

    natural and impossible

     

    secret notes from our base selves

    hidden in the rogue disguise

    of altered memories

    and manufactured adventures 

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    cheronld commented on Imagination SOS

    09-08-2010

    I am a gold card member of the imagination SOS express....I love the ride although a short one....it packed the punch intended...nicely done my friend...Cher
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    simoneaugustus

    09/10/2010

    Thank you so much for the lovely comments!

    kmooney commented on Imagination SOS

    08-26-2010

    Short and sweet. I love it. Full of thought and questions. An imagination is something that God has blessed mankind with. Without it life would be very mundane. I'm not sure any other species has the imaginative capabilities that we, as humans, do. If so, I'm sure it's not easily identifiable or understood. Sometimes I can tell my dog is dreaming, of what I have now way to tell. Very thought provoking. Read my poem Re-curring Nightmare if you get a chance. Very different, but along the same lines. Thanks for sharing...K.
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    simoneaugustus

    08/29/2010

    Thanks for the great feedback, Kevin! And I looked for your poem Re-curring Nightmare but I couldn't find it anywhere in your list. Did I miss it somehow? Could you send me the link? Thanks!

    kmooney

    08/29/2010

    Sorry you couldn't find the poem. Here's the link: http://www.originalpoetry.com/recurring-nightmare Thanks.

    Troy commented on Imagination SOS

    08-17-2010

    Dreams the source of joy and sorrow . a lovly write
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    simoneaugustus

    08/18/2010

    Thank you so much, Troy! Having my daughter start school for the first time brought about all kinds of unusual dreams and this was the result of trying to make sense of it all, lol!

    Olan01 commented on Imagination SOS

    08-16-2010

    Now, this is a poem I can sink my teeth into, right down my alley. Dreams, waking sleep experiences (hypnagogia) is merging with the fabric of the universe and becoming one with it. Love, peace and freedom, Olan
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    simoneaugustus

    08/18/2010

    Olan, I am so glad you enjoyed it! I am always nervous when posting a new piece and wonder how it will be received, so many thanks to you for the kind words and the resulting courage!

    SavVySam commented on Imagination SOS

    08-14-2010

    Thank goodness for those dreams...lol Divining truths and providing escape...if only during REM sleep..nicely done!
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    simoneaugustus

    08/18/2010

    'divining truths and providing escape' is the perfect way to describe exactly what I was trying to accomplish here! You nailed it, Sam! Thank you so much for not only reading my work but showing such a deep understanding of every piece I post. It's comments like yours that give me the courage to post more.

    Poetry comes nearer to vital truth than history.

    Plato (BC 427-BC 347) Greek philosopher.

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