Daughter Dear

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    Daughter Dear

    Skin as soft as butterfly wings

    Tiny seed pearl teeth fixed in a mischievous grin

    Delicate ears like shells

    Soft flowing hair, clover honey in color

    Until the sunlight catches those natural golden highlights

     

    Expressive eyes, so full of

    Wonder, imagination, curiosity

    Fringed with thick dark lashes too numerous to count

    Though I’ve made many attempts

     

    The hidden dimple on your right cheek

    That only shows itself when you are truly delighted

    You alone fill my world

    With endless hope and boundless love

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    dahlusion commented on Daughter Dear

    04-30-2010

    Oh, my, oh my my my...such colorful poetic diction, such surreal imagery. I love every line in this poem. Bravo!!
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    simoneaugustus

    05/02/2010

    Thank you so much for the kind words; it means a lot to me!

    SavVySam commented on Daughter Dear

    04-20-2010

    A profoundly beautiful write! It is so amazing to be privileged to witness to such wonders up close, in those tender moments...;) Sweet tribute!
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    simoneaugustus

    04/21/2010

    Tribute! Exactly! That was the word I was trying to bring to mind without ever using it. Thanks for the kind words!

    cousinsoren commented on Daughter Dear

    04-19-2010

    This poem is anmatedly warm. A perfect portrait of maternal love an adoration.. A cine or video close-up strip of delight . Faultless versification and diction. Pride and exuberance of spirit controlled with propriwty, Not too much volubility (Just the correct amount) nor excessive adulation. My rating for exquisitivwnwss, ssymmetry and charming clarity is a full 10.
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    simoneaugustus

    04/21/2010

    I am honored and humbled by such direct praise. Thank you for encouraging me to include more of my work!

    ginga commented on Daughter Dear

    03-26-2010

    simone, The adoration for that little girl is evident in your strongly emoting descriptions. Beautiful. ginga
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    bloomingsun commented on Daughter Dear

    03-24-2010

    This is a touching and gentle tribute to the light of a mother's heart, her daughter. Simply beautiful and loving through and through...
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    simoneaugustus

    03/25/2010

    Ah, yes, I tell her often that she is so easy to love... :)

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