Death And Hope

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    This is the first poem I ever wrote.  I wrote it when I was nine years old, so do not judge me...  I was a silly little girl, and I love it!

    Death And Hope
    There is only one thing
    Worse than love
    It is what death can bring
    And it aint from above
    Maybe it's good, maybe it's bad
    But I know that it will make you sad


    There is only one thing
    Better than wishes
    It is what death can bring
    But don't tell the fishes
    Everyone knows
    That hope's glow
    Shines like a star
    From close and from far

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    lindabrito commented on Death And Hope

    09-19-2009

    Until I read this piece, I did not think death and hope could be put together. Fantastic piece of work.
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    Poetry comes nearer to vital truth than history.

    Plato (BC 427-BC 347) Greek philosopher.

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