Confession

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    Confession

     Confession

    There's a slow leak
    inside my life-support
    systemation

    Refueling is essential
    for my own 
    self-preservation

    The blessed leak
    drains again my reserve
    ~rationalization?

    perhaps...

    But without it
    I've no use for that quick
    consolation.

    Fix the leak?
    I don't believe I could
    ~confession?

    Yes.

    But not
    without
    contention!

    MLS

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    Marsink commented on Confession

    03-22-2010

    Would it be ok to say, 'all systems go!'? (sorry 'bout that, that scenario would have to be 'concurrent systematic failure') So sad my friend. so very, very sad to be human sometimes...but wait there's more. Great write and told right too! Clever, clever!
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    bloomingsun

    03/23/2010

    Thank you for taking the time to read this fun write. Glad you liked it. :)

    WordSlinger commented on Confession

    02-18-2010

    lol, I like this, water damages, are exspennsive, Restoration, lol, ty WS
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    bloomingsun

    02/23/2010

    Thank you WS, your time in reading and commenting is much appreciated!

    ginga commented on Confession

    02-18-2010

    sun, Love the play on words in this little gem! ginga
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    bloomingsun

    02/18/2010

    Thanks, Ginga, so glad you enjoyed this.. it was fun to write!

    simoneaugustus commented on Confession

    01-15-2010

    Every word poignant. A window into out circular thoughts that eventually bring profound insight.
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    bloomingsun

    01/15/2010

    Thank you, I hesitated to post this for some reason, but it seems to be doing okay. Blessings...

    SavVySam commented on Confession

    01-03-2010

    LOL Most especially this time of year, I am love/am thankful for those~ consolations! Very clever, I like it!
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    bloomingsun

    01/03/2010

    Yes, it give the term "consolation prize" a whole new meaning... Glad you enjoyed it! Thanks for visiting!

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