Renewal

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    Comments and suggestions welcome and appreciated. Thanks.

    Renewal

     water and wind
    elemental promises
    born of God
    spirit-wise
    acting to humanize

    beyond our ken
    to shift and altar us
    grounding fallenness
    raising our reach
    as we beseech

    though half-aware
    we know we are led
    to seek the sky
    while here below
    longing for the reign-bow

    MLS
    2009

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    Hampton commented on Renewal

    12-12-2009

    A lovely poem you have composed here. Please read my poem by the same title. Peace. Hampton
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    bloomingsun

    12/13/2009

    Thanks for your kind comment, I will be happy to read yours. And peace also to you!

    gogant commented on Renewal

    12-12-2009

    In every heart there is a longing to be away in that favored land. I can see over the misty horizon with your words.......................g
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    bloomingsun

    12/13/2009

    Thanks, Gogant for your appreciative read!

    countrypoet commented on Renewal

    11-20-2009

    Our appreciation and wonder at all of nature help us to realize that we are being led to a consciousness of a higher power.Thank you for sharing this beautiful and wonderfully inspiring poem.
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    bloomingsun

    11/21/2009

    Yes, you got it. It is about being led, thank you for your insightful comments; glad you enjoyed it!

    mamasan commented on Renewal

    11-19-2009

    Yes your words are deliberate and perhaps sometimes that elusive rainbow just seems to be where Judy Garland said: somewhere over the rainbow way up high......nice read and it talks to you and lets you talk back to it.............
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    bloomingsun

    11/20/2009

    Thank you Mamasan, for your kind and thoughtful comment. Much appreciated!

    jademelissa74 commented on Renewal

    11-13-2009

    A powerful content indeed. You speak through wisdom of ages that is well conveyed throughout the entire poem. Great job!
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    bloomingsun

    11/13/2009

    So glad you liked it; I wasn't sure anyone would get this one, it is kind of obscure. Thanks!

    If I feel physically as if the top of my head were taken off, I know that is poetry.

    Emily Dickinson (1830-1886) American poet.

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