Vows

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    Vows

     Vows

    etched with truth
    sealed by submission
    posted in blood

    composed of moonlight
    tangled in twilight
    painted on the sky

    exposed to the stars
    splashed across the sea
    drawn on our hearts

    tried against the current
    written in the sand
    freed in tandem flight

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    simoneaugustus commented on Vows

    03-22-2010

    Truly beautiful. Each time I read this, I am deeply moved. This is definitely being saved to my favorites! 10+!
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    bloomingsun

    03/23/2010

    Wow, I am touched by your words, it is so great to hear you are able to connect to this. Thank you for your kind words.

    StandingBear commented on Vows

    01-23-2010

    "Vows" Wow! A very well written work pertaining to vows. Great write! Thank you bloomingsun for your vote per my poem : "into them .. into me .. into you" per survivor week 3 !! SBear
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    bloomingsun

    01/23/2010

    Thank you StandingBear, I am grateful. Your welcome for the vote, your poem was truly deserving! ...peace...

    knight4696 commented on Vows

    12-27-2009

    Beautiful!!! Love the form and flow of this one. Another very nice piece. Great Job! .... Ken
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    bloomingsun

    12/27/2009

    Thank you, your comments are most welcome!

    HarverTomsson commented on Vows

    12-07-2009

    Parsimonious and effective. This one could have gone by telegram!
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    bloomingsun

    12/08/2009

    (chuckling) yes, I tried to be minimal with words on a large topic. Thanks!

    In science one tries to tell people, in such a way as to be understood by everyone, something that no one ever knew before. But in poetry, it's the exact opposite.

    Franz Kafka (1883-1924) Czech writer.

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