Blossoms
BlossomsShowy blossoms
pink and fair
scent-caress
a springtime air
at the sun's touch
opening wide
sweetly blushing
as a bride
blossoms, blossoms
I confess
such perfect trust
few possess...
MLS
Blossoms
3 Comments
Showy blossoms
pink and fair
scent-caress
a springtime air
at the sun's touch
opening wide
sweetly blushing
as a bride
blossoms, blossoms
I confess
such perfect trust
few possess...
MLS
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Oblaidon commented on Blossoms
11-17-2009
- I like this one. Nice metaphore for trust. I give it a 10!
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11/17/2009
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11-17-2009
- Marvelous, simply marvelous. I love the simplicity and complexitiy of this one. Very light and fun to read. I love the springtime as all God's beauty comes to life. There nothing more beautiful than witnessing a sleeping garden suddenly blossoming everywhere. I have one called Overture of Spring that you might enjoy. If you read it, note that it is an acrostic (the first letters of every line form a phrase). Thanks so much for sharing.... Kevin
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11/17/2009
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11-16-2009
- Nice words and so descriptive that I could see the and drink in the scent from their blushing pink leaves. A brief passage that turned out perfection in the form of a blossom.
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11/16/2009
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