Heaven's Beach

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    Heaven's Beach

     Heaven's Beach

    so very vast
    this inland sea
    whose width and depth
    release for me
    the smallness
    and fear of trying

    just be

    I could sit here
    eternal
    watching her waves
    wearing a prayer shawl
    of peace...
    peace

    be still

    this timelessness
    whispers so calm
    of acceptance
    healing and balm
    easing
    a heartache; a crying

    just be still

    this "heaven's beach"
    a haven found
    time breaks here
    on the very ground
    revealing
    a glimmer of heaven

    MLS

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    SavVySam commented on Heaven's Beach

    12-29-2009

    Your last stanza in this wondrous work is sheer perfection! I detect a kindred soul...;)
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    bloomingsun

    12/29/2009

    Thanks again for taking time to visit and read. Your words are inspirational!

    WordSlinger commented on Heaven's Beach

    12-08-2009

    I have never sailed before, but this write, brought me images of sailing the heavens sea, ty WS
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    bloomingsun

    12/08/2009

    Thanks again, for commenting, much appreciated!

    countrypoet commented on Heaven's Beach

    11-20-2009

    The wonderful use of metaphors,smooth rhythm and vivid imagery help the reader to visualize such a wonderful place. The ebb and flow to the words has a soothing effect as a person reads it.Well done!
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    bloomingsun

    11/21/2009

    Thank you, I am so pleased to hear you enjoyed it. Thanks!

    tierra7 commented on Heaven's Beach

    11-20-2009

    BEAUTIFUL! i i love the beach, as i was readin' this i was visualisin' the contentedness that would wash over me while walkin' barefoot in the warm sands of a beach.. such an adrenaline rush havin' crashin' waves baptized my feet...thank you for this touch of Heaven..very sublime....Blessings be yours, T-7
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    bloomingsun

    11/20/2009

    Contentedness, that really fits this one. I thank you for taking time and for your comments... much appreciated, thanks!

    mamasan commented on Heaven's Beach

    11-19-2009

    Ah I am reading and listening and I hear you and even see the prayer shawl and I take it and add a prayer while watching the water ebb and I am transfixed by the lulling of the waves......gosh this got my brain juices going.....great read for me....good picture...
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    bloomingsun

    11/20/2009

    Thanks so much for taking time to read! I always love seeing what others have to say. This is one of my favorite pieces, so I am glad you enjoyed it.

    Poetry comes nearer to vital truth than history.

    Plato (BC 427-BC 347) Greek philosopher.

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