Where did you go?

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  • Loss

    Where did you go?

    I just look around

    and see no one

    my family is gone

    everyone except

    my mom

    my grandma

    my aunt

    my grandpa

    an smy brother.

    Everyone else is

    walking toward

    the light

    soon they are

    gone for good

    today is your birthday

    Auntie Arlene

    and I had to

    go to your grave

    to say happy birthday

    to you

    where did you go?

    Why did you go?

    Those are the questions

    I always ask myself

    ans will never find the answers

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    loveswar09 commented on Where did you go?

    12-11-2009

    I like this! I mean I really like this. It's sad yet beautiful. It tells of pain yet love....and I am not making any sense! But I liked it. =)
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    EmoAlexis commented on Where did you go?

    10-01-2009

    that is so pretty, in a morbid kind of way... but its beautiful
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    mpssister commented on Where did you go?

    08-17-2009

    loved it was very good i lost my dad in 1987 on christmas day it was hard i know how you feel your friend theresa
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    Johnny4444 commented on Where did you go?

    08-12-2009

    It may be hard to understand why things happen the way they do, but God knows why, and He is always here to love and comfort you, no matter what. I know, because when I was touching bottom with nowhere to turn and no one to turn to, He took me by yhe hand and lifted me up to a better place, a better awareness of His awesome, saving power and love. Be brave, dear heart; have faith and be blessed in the knowledge that God isn't the only one who loves you. John.
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    scrye commented on Where did you go?

    08-11-2009

    Very nice remembrance and wonderfully written. Keep posting brit you write so well. Your aunt would be honored by this.
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    In science one tries to tell people, in such a way as to be understood by everyone, something that no one ever knew before. But in poetry, it's the exact opposite.

    Franz Kafka (1883-1924) Czech writer.

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