the darkness

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this is a poem i thought of when i was thinking of my past. i also though of it when i was listening to stories of other peoples lives. enjoy

the darkness

 

As I look into to past

I walk into the darkness

of my mind

that goes on forever

black as night.

 

The darkness

is the brightest part

of my life

all of the things are highlighted in black.

 

In my garden

there are only black roses

with droplets of blood

instead of water

and the sun never shines on them.

 

As I look into

the darkness of my mind

I see you walking towards me

a knife, and heart

in hand.

 

I walk into the

tunnel of darkness

and see a light at the end

but I keep walking and walking

but never make it to the light

I just stay in the darkness

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jj1562 commented on the darkness

03-23-2010

this has tons of emotion i've had my share of ups and downs. i unerstand where u r coming from. good write

Sydney commented on the darkness

02-21-2010

this is full of emotion. i can understand. i keep tackling my depression and its not easy to come out of the darkness. this is really good

frazel5 commented on the darkness

12-22-2009

awwy.....i'm so sorry that life is so dark for you. Trust me you'll come out of it. if you ever need 2 talk just holler! i'm always here! ~the fraz

Laubster commented on the darkness

11-06-2009

Very dark, but good. I, too, use darkness as a tool in some of my poetry.

loveswar09 commented on the darkness

10-27-2009

darkness, that's a word i'm very familiar with, since i too used to cut.

In science one tries to tell people, in such a way as to be understood by everyone, something that no one ever knew before. But in poetry, it's the exact opposite.

Franz Kafka (1883-1924) Czech writer.

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