I REMEMBER

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I wrote this in memory of my aunt that died two years ago today. she was a great person and will always be loved.

I REMEMBER

 

I think about you everyday

And how I miss you in every way

I said goodbye for the last time

Two years ago today.

I still remember

Going over to you house

To spend the day with you

And we played every possible game.

But yet I remember

Me and you sitting together

And crying

That was on July 3, 2004

The day uncle died.

I can still hear you soothing me

Trying to make me feel better.

I remember asking you a question

Will he be my guardian angel?”

That was the same question that I asked

Grandma two years ago about you.

Now I think about how 13 is my unlucky number.

I think that you are always going to be

My guardian angel

And watching over me.

 

 

* DEDICATED TO ARLENE VOLK 1/13/2008 *

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786mona commented on I REMEMBER

05-13-2010

kind of sad...yet a beautiful write! :) keep on writing please!

Chaos128 commented on I REMEMBER

05-10-2010

The loved ones wemiss are always with us as long as we keep them in our heart! Good work, sk8ergirl; I know your Aunt Arlene appreciates it, too.

Panaramicpoet commented on I REMEMBER

04-01-2010

it is ver heartfelt . .i really enjoyed how if flowed. Thanks for sharing

tobi commented on I REMEMBER

04-01-2010

this is lovely, but as long as you keep her memory alive she's not really gone cher.

kmooney commented on I REMEMBER

03-31-2010

Very nice poem. I liked this alot. Very emotional. Thanks for sharing....K

In science one tries to tell people, in such a way as to be understood by everyone, something that no one ever knew before. But in poetry, it's the exact opposite.

Franz Kafka (1883-1924) Czech writer.

sk8ergirl’s Poems (17)

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Title Comments
I REMEMBER 14
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why? 3
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Falling 9
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grandma i love you 5
anywhere 15
Bird Without Wings 11
I miss you 14
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