The Thought.......is love

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    i wrote this poem for my aunt when she passed and put it with her in the casket so she could remember me i hope you will enjoy it

    The Thought.......is love

    The thought of loosing you

    hurt,

    but now I know

    how it feels.

     

    I hope you are watching

    over us,

    being our guardian angel

    and seeing how much we love you.

     

    Your life is a flower

    all of the good petals staying attached,

    all of the bad petals falling off

    and the flower will continue to grow.

     

    The thought

    that comes to mind,

    when I think of you

    is, Will you live better than you did before?

     

    Just keep watching us

    and don't forget us,

    think of us everyday

    when you are talking to the “rest” of the family.

     

    You did so much

    for us,

    and now we can

    only repay you, in love.

     

    Love is what

    over powers hurt,

    so just remember

    we love you, always.

     

     

     

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    jj1562 commented on The Thought.......is love

    12-20-2009

    Nicely writen i like how you seperated quatrains, and I know she's watching you, nice job. ps. you spelled losing wrong
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    SilverGirl commented on The Thought.......is love

    11-11-2009

    What a lovely poem and beautiful testiment of your 'undying' love for your sweet aunt. Your dear aunt is and will always be around you.. watching and helping guide you. Thank you for sharing this with me. Big loving hugs to you.. SG xoxo
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    rougepriest commented on The Thought.......is love

    10-27-2009

    nicely done, well expressed with out being maudlin, only 1 thing loosing is spelled losing, may wanna fix that part, nice job
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    sk8ergirl

    10/27/2009

    thanks i will

    Dancer022597 commented on The Thought.......is love

    10-27-2009

    I'm so sorry I know how you feel. I wrote a poem a about my uncle when he died. Keep up the great, writing will take you places!
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    dumplin commented on The Thought.......is love

    10-10-2009

    this is lovely, who did you lose? I'm very sorry for your loss. you are too young for such thoughts.
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    Poetry is when an emotion has found its thought and the thought has found words.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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