anywhere

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  • Sadness

    Poem Commentary

    hey guyz i hope you like this poem i was just walking and didn't know where i was going when i came up with this poem i just typed it in my phone as a text. well hope you like it

    anywhere

    Anywhere

     

    I need to go somewhere

    to go anywhere,

    I need to get away

    from here.

    I really feel like dying

    I need to feel free again

    to go anywhere,

    to some place I love

    just to get away from here.

    Otherwise, please just kill me

    I feel like I can't be me

    I need to go somewhere, anywhere,

    I really need to go somewhere

    to congure what I most fear.

    Just stab my heart out

    anywhere

    that is where I want to go,

    anyplace will do

    even if it is a show.

    Help me go

    Anywhere

    that is somewhere,

    but what do I know

    nothing.

    Anywhere

     

     

     

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    joshkingston commented on anywhere

    08-01-2009

    i like this one alot it fills like it came from the heart
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    Dancer022597 commented on anywhere

    07-31-2009

    That's really, really deep stuff! It's really good just don't try any of it. Great job, don't kill yourselk and keep on writing!
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    Troubador commented on anywhere

    07-30-2009

    conjure is spelled conjure but I liked your poem anyhow.
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    Troubador commented on anywhere

    07-30-2009

    A very well written for being written on the fly I liked the sense of angst that youportrayed so well. Your writing style reminds me of the poet Dylan Thomas It is very descriptive.
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    Vincent commented on anywhere

    07-30-2009

    Just believe in yourself and you will be just fine. good poem that expresses what we all feel at one time or another. smiles Vincent
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    Poetry is when an emotion has found its thought and the thought has found words.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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