Bird Without Wings

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    hey i hope you guyz like this poem. my favorite celtic thunder song is A bird without wings. so i kinda made my own version of it as a poem i hope you all like it thanks enjoy

    Bird Without Wings

    Bird Without Wings

     

    sometimes I feel as though I can't breath

    like I am not going to survive today,

    all because you are not here

    because I miss you more then I can say.

     

    Like a bird without wings

    that is trying to fly,

    I try to stay alive and free

    you know why.

     

    How do you think I would act

    if my guardian angel wasn't here,

    watching over me

    that is what I most fear.

     

    Like a church with no steeple

    that is how we are,

    I'd be lost without you

    when you are far.

     

    Like a bird without wings that longs to be flying

    Like a motherless child left lonely and crying,

    I am lost without you watching

    with that I am not lying.

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    brandice commented on Bird Without Wings

    04-05-2011

    WHAT THE CRAP!?! that birds gonna fall outa the sky if it tries to fly oh well... no jk haha but i feel like that every weekend an the thing is im just his friend but i have a HUGE crush on him and he knows of course and he said were friends but it looks like were dating to so many poops but were not soooo i feel like tht all the time o sorry i just told you alot tht u probably didnt want to here SORRY...TEEHEE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

    loveswar09 commented on Bird Without Wings

    12-11-2009

    T.T Sad but very beautiful! I really liked it. The last part made me want to write another poem where I just let all my feelings go. Keep this up!!! Got it? =)

    elderwolf254 commented on Bird Without Wings

    08-02-2009

    very nice. it moves me i liked it very much. yuo know how to write girl

    nmedina commented on Bird Without Wings

    07-28-2009

    Very well written. I enjoyed the honesty and the deep feeling behind your words. It makes me think about those I miss.

    KENZIEMAC commented on Bird Without Wings

    07-27-2009

    this is great your symbolism is marvolus and the refrences are original. i love it, it really sounds like it comes from the heart! keep goin girl

    Poetry is when an emotion has found its thought and the thought has found words.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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