Life Is.....

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    hey i had to do this for school but i really don't know

    Life Is.....

    Life is a never- ending stream

    just when you think it is over,

    you go around a bend

    and it keeps on going.

     

    Life is a book

    every word, every page,

    is your life

    you just have to know how to read it.

     

    Life is a storm

    darkening skies and lightening,

    but then

    bright, sunny, cloudless skies lay ahead.

     

    Life is a rose

    even with the thorns,

    you have to treat it delicately

    otherwise you will crush your dreams.

     

    Life is something

    you need to fight for,

    even though there will be hard times

    you can never give up on...... life.

     

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    wolfinlove commented on Life Is.....

    12-07-2009

    Beautiful. Well written and I loved the first metaphor. Life is filled with many twists and turns, whether it be on a raging river of white water or a smooth and flowing current. Keep writing.
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    jj1562 commented on Life Is.....

    11-10-2009

    Great job! Really good use of metaphore. I completely agree you have to know how to handle life nomatter how hard it gets. 10 from me.
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    WinterFrost commented on Life Is.....

    10-18-2009

    For a 13 year old you've discovered a lot about life. Still, you will find more out there yet. Winter
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    iluvchrist4ever commented on Life Is.....

    10-07-2009

    i love this poem, it tells everybody to accept themselves how they are.
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    skordakis commented on Life Is.....

    09-27-2009

    I really love this poem, its very true and thats why i believe u deserve this 10! keep writtin
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    Poetry is when an emotion has found its thought and the thought has found words.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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