when she closes her eyes

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    when she closes her eyes

     whenever she closes her eyes
    she always seems to cry
    seeing things from the past
    wishing the memories would not last
    times of hurt and pain
    are seen over and over agian
    days she thought the world would end
    just wishing once the rules could bend
    so she would not have to see
    exactly how cruel this world can be
    with so much hurt and sorrow
    sometimes she wished for no tomorrow
    so she wouldn't have to feel the pain
    over and over and over again
    but their is nothing more she can do
    even after all shes been through
    whenever she closes her eyes
    she always seems to cry

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    BDIsernhagen commented on when she closes her eyes

    06-02-2009

    a beautiful way to capture the emotion, and remind us of how some people live. thank you for posting this piece.
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    Poetry is either something that lives like fire inside you or else it is nothing, an empty formalized bore around which pedants can endlessly drone their notes and explanations.

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