perfect prooposal

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    perfect prooposal

     the door opens as i draw near
    candlelight fills the room
    with fragrances which lighten the mood
    rose petals lie on the ground
    in a trail leading to a small table
    with a candle light dinner
    taking my hand, he leads me to my chair
    we eat quietly as a violinist plays
    clearing his throat, he stands up
    reaching for my hand
    pulling me up to dance
    but instead he kneels down on one knee
    proposing a beautiful ring
    asking me to be his wife

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    redbloodink commented on perfect prooposal

    12-23-2009

    nice Bang... sweet but simple and what every woman wants except me...... red
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    Diamondsho commented on perfect prooposal

    06-03-2009

    I like your style very romantic and romance is a state of mind then a way of life, so you left me in suspense did you say yes?
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    Poetry is either something that lives like fire inside you or else it is nothing, an empty formalized bore around which pedants can endlessly drone their notes and explanations.

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