dwelling fire

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    dwelling fire

     burning from the inside out
    a fire dwells deep within
    being fueled off sorrow and loss
    from my heart being broken
    into millions of pieces
    through lies and deciet
    a misjudgement on my part
    believing i could trust you
    instead you went off
    with someone condidered family
    somone who was my best friend
    you misled me to believe you loved me
    to get what you so desired
    leaving me lost and confused
    as to why you would mislead me
    causing so much pain
    igniting a fire
    that continues to burn
    dwelling deep within me

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    shewheat46 commented on dwelling fire

    06-02-2009

    A broken hert poem, very good. Ive got a few of those myself. Some beautiful words can come from a broken heart, funny isnt it? Please come visit my profile and read some of my poems. I like comments just as much as the next poet. Thanks for sharing.
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    Chi commented on dwelling fire

    06-02-2009

    expressive and its a story poem sounds like real life and a poem others can relate to...so I gave it a 40 rating. look forward to reading some more of you poems; Chi.
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    Poetry is not a turning loose of emotion, but an escape from emotion.

    T. S. Eliot (1888-1965) American-English poet and playwright.

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