staring out my window

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    staring out my window

     i keep staring out my window
    constantly thinking of you
    wondering when you will realize
    that i am still here for you
    please don't be so sad
    just try to forget
    i never meant to hurt you
    it was just an accident
    can you give me a second chance
    or even try to forgive me
    i'm sorry that i hurt you
    but these feelings that i have for you-
    just won't let me be
    i keep staring out my window
    thinking about what i have done
    and now that it's too late
    i realize that you were the one
    i keep staring out my window
    wondering what to do
    i guess i should just move on without you

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    estee commented on staring out my window

    06-02-2009

    I also think this is a good poem I love the story behind it because it seems like it really happened and we can all relate to this in a way realizing when we made a mistake and trying to fix it is sometimes not an option. great job
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    elissa13 commented on staring out my window

    06-02-2009

    aw this is really sad! but it was amazing! i love how you brought it all together! great job. i am favoriting this one
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    Poetry is not a turning loose of emotion, but an escape from emotion.

    T. S. Eliot (1888-1965) American-English poet and playwright.

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