The Rising
THE RISING
The sky was a sea of rolling red waves;
Crimson blood flooded the new dawn,
Enveloping the vast blanket of darkness
As Mother Earth,
Welcomed the birth,
Of another
Golden Morn.
By Rita K. Webb
The Rising
12 Comments
Tags: Nature
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RettaJ commented on The Rising
05-14-2010
- wow...okay, i appreciate this poem. i know you can expand on this a bit more on this though. there is more you want to say in this i'm sure of it.
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gogant commented on The Rising
04-25-2010
- You've taken a scene of a spectacular morning sunrise and painted it here for us to view with you.............Lovely...............................g
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WrittenJustice commented on The Rising
03-12-2010
- sounds like a really neat way to describe a desert sunrise..
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