Closer Still

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    Closer Still

     Closer Still
    You are the sweet blood that flows through my veins
    My heart envelopes you with every beat
    I yearn and ache for you
    Come.....my love.....and be mine
    This is our time...yes come closer… yet closer still
    Let me fill you with my breath of life
    As our hearts join and beat together
    One woman....one man...
    Come my love.......take my hand
    Walk with me as I  take you on that journey
    To our love place that only our minds and our hearts know of
    Let your breath of love flow through my soul...my body
    As you take possession of the flame you have kindled within my loins
    This is our time…yes come closer...yet closer still

    By  Rita Kay Webb

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    Teardrops commented on Closer Still

    10-02-2010

    A place of love you have with just your special one great poem written by a talented poetress thanks for the read Marie
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    Chaos128 commented on Closer Still

    09-29-2010

    A journey to the place that only the two of you know; that's as romantic a concept as I've ever heard. Ha ha Mom knows how to cook (and I don't mean hamburgers). : )
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    nonners commented on Closer Still

    09-29-2010

    hot hot hot-the passion leaps off the page. I love feeling this way although its been a long while
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    stellar commented on Closer Still

    09-26-2010

    ohhhh....this is so intense...Love that feeling........^_^ v
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    cheronld commented on Closer Still

    09-26-2010

    This is a very beautiful write with heartfelt feelings and smoky passion....nicely done...Cher
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    Poetry is when an emotion has found its thought and the thought has found words.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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