scrambled eggs and the future for breakfast
looking
forward
to
a
morning
with
breakfast
scrambled eggs
arent
really needed
well...
we can skip
the
brekfast
looking forward
to
a
morning
soon
and
all
the mornings
that follow
waking
up
with you
scrambled eggs and the future for breakfast
13 Comments
Poem Commentary
...(blush) just thinking out loud.. (nuff said..)looking
forward
to
a
morning
with
breakfast
scrambled eggs
arent
really needed
well...
we can skip
the
brekfast
looking forward
to
a
morning
soon
and
all
the mornings
that follow
waking
up
with you
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Poem Comments
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FUBAR93 commented on scrambled eggs and the future for breakfast
04-20-2010
- idk why I need to even comment, since it goes without saying you're awesome ; D
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MindNumbing commented on scrambled eggs and the future for breakfast
04-06-2010
- I love a poem that can speak it's message clearly with brevity. This is such a beautiful sentiment in all it's simplicity. Thanks for sharing :)
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ladyvirgo commented on scrambled eggs and the future for breakfast
04-05-2010
- This poem was GREAT!.... First The title caught my attention and I was very pleased with what I read on your bio and your poem....Kudos
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FreeBird02 commented on scrambled eggs and the future for breakfast
03-28-2010
- How can one top Chaos128's comments on this simple but touching work you have presented before us. Breakfast is great, eye to eye, with a loved one. But as you say this can go all left undone while these two, hand in hand, walk away. Good job. FreeBird 02
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Chaos128 commented on scrambled eggs and the future for breakfast
03-23-2010
- A clear and forthright message with a little sideways twist, and the lack of bells and whistles making the message stronger. Very original ha ha.
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