my wish
I wish
you
grant
yourself
gentleness
joy
hope
and
the ability
to
receive
and
cognate
love
create us
with me
my wish
20 Comments
Poem Commentary
yesI wish
you
grant
yourself
gentleness
joy
hope
and
the ability
to
receive
and
cognate
love
create us
with me
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01-02-2011
- very simple and too the point, especially like the line "create us...with me" it really speaks to the heart of relationships and should always be keep in mind..... good work
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02/14/2011
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12-28-2010
- I love this poem! I like how the way it grants a wish of joy, love and hope to anyone that believes.
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optimistic commented on my wish
12-01-2010
- This is a poem to wake up in the morning to and grant people good life and love peace joy happiness.
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11-02-2010
- It's been quite a while since Ive been on here.. I love this very beautiful! Hope your doing well!
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anaisnais commented on my wish
10-28-2010
- Beautifully written, well done I really enjoyed the straight forward simplicity of it!
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08/15/2012
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