Camelot

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    Camelot



    Author's Comments:
    "this was my first poem.. i was seven
    ..from hence came Origionalmerlin...




    Have you once thought:
    "Are we Camelot
    or an Atlantis
    unclaimed by the sea"?

    What more is time
    'cept some poet's rhyme?
    A song to step to
    when you're loved true..






    © 1970 origionalmerlin



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    knight4696 commented on Camelot

    08-30-2009

    I can't even start to imagine - writing something like this when I was 7. You must've had one hell of childhood. To be able to express such a emotion and maturity. Great work - for an adult - nevermind a 7 yr old!
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    Paleidia commented on Camelot

    07-15-2009

    You are certainly a born poet! You're probably an old soul. I loved this,. origionalmerlin.
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    laydbak1 commented on Camelot

    07-04-2009

    You must've been a very, well read, 7 year old to have pieced together this short, yet vivid and descriptive verbage from ancient lore...
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    mcox commented on Camelot

    06-26-2009

    You must be one of those whiz kids that have a specail gift endowed upon you. Its great that you have build upon your gift. that is quite a poem for a 7 year old. Thanks for inviting me to be your friend. I will enjoy your contributions of thought. Myrna Cox
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    wheelsal commented on Camelot

    06-08-2009

    Seven, "wow". How could you have that kind of wisdom then? You have unique streetwise poetry. I have read only a couple and will get to more soon. I'm new on this.
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    origionalmerlin

    06/16/2009

    to be accurate it was at six and a little over a half (still my seventh year though

    Poetry is not the expression of personality but an escape from personality.

    T. S. Eliot (1888-1965) American-English poet and playwright.

    origionalmerlin’s Poems (66)

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    Best teacher... 1 10/14/2012
    Center of everything...
    .    		 4 10/09/2012
    The best part of every moment... 14 10/02/2012
    Gods' Hat Size 3 10/02/2012
    Occanum, Susquehanna .(.morning with a hint of noon) 2 08/16/2012
    I am a Chef 3 08/13/2012
    For Your Information..
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    Smiling 6 11/25/2010
    my wish 20 08/01/2010
    anything less... 7 05/24/2010
    the choice is us 8 05/18/2010
    one whole we 9 04/30/2010
    from a text message to whom i Love 10 04/26/2010
    if you Think... check what you know... 10 04/23/2010
    see you always 5 04/23/2010
    less than half an hour till ...seeing you 2 04/23/2010
    chocolate mousse cookies and eternity (whichever lasts longer) 5 04/22/2010
    Oregano The Difference 6 04/20/2010
    Stainless Union 14 04/15/2010
    scrambled eggs and the future for breakfast 13 03/04/2010
    Yes , and Yes Again ! 9 02/27/2010
    The Birth of the Queen 18 07/17/2009
    The Queens Repose 33 07/05/2009
    The Pissed Piskeys Prank 27 07/05/2009
    little dream 24 07/05/2009
    Cause The Music To Play 14 07/29/2009
    Long Live origionalpoet
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    Pounding Lust 13 05/28/2009
    Typo Blues 15 08/08/2009
    Closest Call (part 2 (not fiction or a poem) 1 05/21/2009
    Closest Call (part 1 (not fiction or a poem) 1 05/21/2009
    Whisper 2 05/26/2009
    Enlightenment 1 05/26/2009
    When She Loves Me 6 08/12/2009
    All Night 1 05/25/2009
    Till Your Mind Melts Away (1. warmup) 3 08/13/2009
    Wings 3 05/20/2009
    Angels shall sing thee to rest 1 05/25/2009
    The Coming Of The Queen 0 05/25/2009
    Mnogiye veshi ( Russian) 1 05/24/2009
    Dyerzhi moi ruki 1 05/24/2009
    Momenti lyubvi 1 05/24/2009
    Now I lay me... 4 05/25/2009
    meloncholics annonomous 3 05/25/2009
    Sorry Dante 12 05/28/2009
    Moments With You. 10 05/25/2009
    Many Things 4 05/25/2009
    If the World were a Bed 10 05/25/2009
    Eternity 16 05/25/2009
    From the Dream We Soon Shall Awake 22 05/25/2009
    "All Night AS Well" 10 05/25/2009
    Presently 3 05/24/2009
    Eye, I, Aye (bluestoneeat
    er collection #1)     		5 03/22/2009
    The Touch Within 11 05/25/2009
    (at the stone of never ending) 8 05/25/2009
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    Flowers 7 05/25/2009
    Camelot 16 05/25/2009
    OZ isn't me 12 05/25/2009
    Hold my hand often 22 05/25/2009
    Mnogiye veshi (Many things ) 5 05/25/2009
    Momenti , {Moments of Love } 11 05/25/2009
    unspoken connotations 9 05/25/2009
    Coffee and Sex 30 05/25/2009
    To Kiss a star 33 05/25/2009
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