Moments With You.

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    Moments With You.







    moments of love find us
    dissolving and expanding
    I am submitted
    to your very essence
    in full humbleness of awe
    simplicity surrenders me
    totally to the love
    you touch and make Holy
    you breathe and make sacred you
    love and I exist





    © 2005 origionalmerlin

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    nightsky commented on Moments With You.

    07-12-2009

    oops...late night write in last post--I amend that to say our true selves can only partially exist sans amour--and maybe not for very long. Our souls need love like plants need sun, air, and water.
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    nightsky commented on Moments With You.

    07-12-2009

    The essence and melting intimates something of the Divine....dissoving and expanding, like air or liquid, ether of the Universe. 'Humility and awe' are amazing to come to in themselves.....and surrender shares language with the mystical. 'You love and I exist', is so POWERFUL, so simple and true--without another being able to truly love, our true selves cannot exist. The expression of these thoughts is Incrediblly Beautiful--it makes me feel wonder and awe to read it!
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    yulybeauty commented on Moments With You.

    07-05-2009

    MMmmm...you are totally taken by your feelings, sublime
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    orangepony commented on Moments With You.

    07-04-2009

    love of showing come from within that everlasting, between two souls, spirits of two become one into that never ending adventure of life unpredictable road,heart of your romance is always pure of a river that flow to reach the all mighty one. carolyn
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    laydbak1 commented on Moments With You.

    07-04-2009

    The voice here describes in a very simplistic, fragile, yet delicate tone how much they love this person... Good write...
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    Poetry is finer and more philosophical than history; for poetry expresses the universal, and history only the particular.

    Aristotle (384 BC-322 BC) Greek philosopher.

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