(at the stone of never ending)
At The Stone of Never-Ending
WE meet within Love Balanced
Differences Distant
Mind With Hearts Soul Present
Observed
Melded
As
One
© 2005 origionalmerlin
(at the stone of never ending)
8 Comments
At The Stone of Never-Ending
WE meet within Love Balanced
Differences Distant
Mind With Hearts Soul Present
Observed
Melded
As
One
© 2005 origionalmerlin
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Poem Comments
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ginga commented on (at the stone of never ending)
07-15-2009
- A short and to-the-point write that gives the reader a sense of requited and "rock" love. I loved it. Ginga
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symash commented on (at the stone of never ending)
07-08-2009
- your mate is very lucky to have someone with such love and devotion put into words...i can only imagine how it is without the paper.
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boomchild commented on (at the stone of never ending)
05-28-2009
- And so it go's....one after the other after the other after the other.. Thank God, these are just awesome, tell me, what is it like? up there on top of the poetic pile that is, are you published?
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kaitlynrylie commented on (at the stone of never ending)
05-17-2009
- short and simple but gets your point across- well written
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mrobb6488 commented on (at the stone of never ending)
05-12-2009
- Short and sweet. You got your point across while using the form that I have come to know and love. I love the capitalization that put the emphasis on WE.
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