Repentant Heart

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  • Forgiveness

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    I wrote this poem, last year, for a friend of mine. Whom I unintentionally hurt. Yes, I am human and I too make mistakes.

    Repentant Heart

     I feel I have no right
    To ask your forgiveness
    And apologizing in words
    Was never good enough for me

    Draw close to me
    And feel my repentant heart beat
    Abrogate my feelings of guilt
    And set free my soul from shame

    Give me one chance
    To breathe new life
    Into what was once
    A dance between two hearts

    So cold and lonely
    Are my days without you
    And I ache to see
    You smile again

    My friend, my love
    Allow me to hold your heart
    In mine once more
    And prove myself worthy of you

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    tierra7 commented on Repentant Heart

    11-17-2010

    Excellent pen Hun, your true heart reflects on the sincerity in this piece...you show an honest man sharin' his soul...indeed we are All human...we falter in every respect...your kind nature and lovin' character win ya over...Kudos for your lovely expression...I love it...Peace Love and Light, Tierra@}-'-,
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    REGINA2 commented on Repentant Heart

    10-31-2010

    A beautiful poem once again. I can feel your lonely heart in the words.
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    themommyof2 commented on Repentant Heart

    10-30-2010

    Very touching. If we could all express our sorrow in such a meaningful way!
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    blackfootlady commented on Repentant Heart

    10-30-2010

    Apology Accepted,lol! Just Kidding! This was very,very good friend.I enjoyed it alot-God Bless- Black
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    lonewolf

    10/30/2010

    so you dont forgive me?? lol!

    Poetry is finer and more philosophical than history; for poetry expresses the universal, and history only the particular.

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