I'LL SLICE OPEN MY VEINS

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    I'LL SLICE OPEN MY VEINS

    "I'll slice open my veins to let romance come in",
    she whispered in pain as she cut her arm again
    every time someone tried to love her she went insane
    memories to hard to handle brought nightmares and shame
    crying at night all alone she hid sometimes behind the door
    not knowing the difference from a nightmare and reality
    when the sun rose again there she lay cold on the floor
    as he walked in room a scream was heard from him
    once more she laid in a hospital bed
    as her spirit debated between life and death
    unconscious she suddenly mumbled,
    "I sliced open my veins to let romance in",
    there she died.

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    Trista3 commented on I'LL SLICE OPEN MY VEINS

    12-04-2013

    that was potent. very well done. very moving. you truly have a way with words.
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    poett

    12/04/2013

    Thank you

    MarionYost commented on I'LL SLICE OPEN MY VEINS

    02-16-2010

    I like the idea behind this one. like the message. -All the best- Marion
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    Poetry is finer and more philosophical than history; for poetry expresses the universal, and history only the particular.

    Aristotle (384 BC-322 BC) Greek philosopher.

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