Trials of the Soul

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    Trials of the Soul

    The soul descending into the depths of hell and back

                    Backlashed by words on soft lips

    Lips that can’t be denied power

                    Power to change the world

    World of hate and destruction

                    Destruction and demolition of life

    Life taken for granted

                    Granted by chance from God

    God can take it away any minute

                    Minute by minute always slithering closer

    Closer to the end of time

                    Time to find the truth

    The truth expressed in digital format

                    Format of prose and poems

    Poems of wisdom and feelings

                    Feelings from a damaged heart

    A heart that has been touched

                    Touched deep within the caverns of the soul

    The soul descending into the depths of hell and back

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    ApaqRasgirl commented on Trials of the Soul

    07-12-2010

    Wow! That was a powerful statement so fueled and filled with emotions of love and despair, terrific words of inspiration here to all dear friend, thanks for sharing this with us. blessings dear and I pray that we all wake up and see the light beside us. love asha
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    angel33614 commented on Trials of the Soul

    07-12-2010

    WOW!!! I love the format of this poem very unique! I can't say I have ever seen anything like it and I have read alot of poetry over the years, great poem my friend, bravo!!! The only thing that is better than the format is the meaning found within the poem itself, truely inspiring piece of work! Poetry in the motion of life, each line hung in the blance of the previous, the flow is like that of the river's bend, natural as can be but with passion and power beyond the words of expression. It is almsot like two separte poems woven together to make one master piece of perfection, I am speechless and in awe at your brilliance!!! Purity of the soul, journey well!!! Angel
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    MootPoint

    07/12/2010

    Thank you Angel for your praise. This is the best said about any of my scribbles. thanks.

    JadedJezzabel commented on Trials of the Soul

    06-27-2010

    I agree with aggieprof but don't know what its called either. Will try to find out for you......great poem
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    aggieprof commented on Trials of the Soul

    06-23-2010

    Very unique style. I have no idea what it is called. Looks very difficult to do. Takes a great deal of creativity. Well done.
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    MootPoint

    06/24/2010

    Thank you very much.

    Maleficent commented on Trials of the Soul

    06-09-2010

    I like the form you've used here and the repetition... the way one message leads to the next... very creative write! ;)
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    MootPoint

    06/10/2010

    Thanks, I am inspired by the best :)

    Poetry is when an emotion has found its thought and the thought has found words.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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