Bedtime Story

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    Bedtime Story

    So you want a story to

    really creep you out?

    So you really want to know about

    The vermin that crawl about your snout?

     

    The things that crawl in bed

    with you at night.

    They gnaw on you ‘til

    your hair turns steamed rice white.

     

    They squirm and slime

    between your little toes.

    All they want to do

    is to remove your night time clothes.

     

    Their teeth are as sharp

    as a two-edged knife.

    They will carry you off

    and make you for their wife.

     

    Can you really sleep

    after all of this?

    Me thinks your panties

    you will shit and piss.

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    stever commented on Bedtime Story

    09-04-2010

    lol.... i love this kinda stuff ,,you got talent,, i could tell this to the grand kids
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    MootPoint

    09/08/2010

    Thank you for all your comments. This one was a Q&D (quick and dirty). Uh, poor grand kids. :)

    ApaqRasgirl commented on Bedtime Story

    07-29-2010

    ok that was creepy, think I will change my sheets today........lol.....great write loves ya asha
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    MootPoint

    07/29/2010

    Thanks, this was a response to one of QueenoftheKnight's poems. I couldn't help the last line. It fit so well.

    Teardrops commented on Bedtime Story

    06-08-2010

    Well , Well , Well you trying to scare me . Well you didn't you just discribed some of the married couples i know lol Marie
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    knight4696 commented on Bedtime Story

    06-04-2010

    Damn it! I could've sworn my kids were locked up in my moat!! They are slippery little mutha's! Hey Queen? Have You checked on the kids lately? :) Awesome write Moot! :) Ken
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    MootPoint

    06/07/2010

    Thanks Ken.

    QueenotheKnight commented on Bedtime Story

    06-03-2010

    O those are juz a few of my minions~ They slither in under the door sumtimez~ They don't even think or have opinions~ I crush them under my heels and wipe away the slime! ;) Creepy with a humorous twist~ Straight to the fav's list! =)
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