Follows Me

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    Follows Me

    He sometimes leads the way

    Sometimes he lags behind

    Follows me in the day

    Has no name but he’s mine

    On rainy days he’s gone

    He finds another place

    He will be dead and lost

    Once I've gone to outer space


    He notes errs I’m making

    He keeps an eye on me

    Knows where I am sleeping

    He’s in dreams I sometimes see


    He’s really not much fun

    Has no prominent features

    There’s a place he calls home

    It is dark and full of creatures


    April 13, 2011

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    poett commented on Follows Me

    06-03-2013

    Kind of made me think of a scary little creature as your shadow following you hahaha. Nice write
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    cheronld commented on Follows Me

    04-26-2011

    Nicely done my friend...I smiled reading this and the first thing that came to mind was...your shadow....wrong or right...this was a great write...I so did not mean to rhyme...sorry...lol....Cher
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    MootPoint

    04/26/2011

    You got it right. I took some artistic liberties towards the end. Thanks again.

    ShadowEyes commented on Follows Me

    04-13-2011

    Very nicely written. :) I really like the way you have written this. Keep up your work :)
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    MootPoint

    04/13/2011

    Thanks Shadow's Eyes. :)

    Poetry is when an emotion has found its thought and the thought has found words.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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