A Whisper

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    A Whisper

     Awoken by a whisper
    Telling me to tend my garden
    In a dream as dawn begins
    A peaceful moment soon to end

    Soft words in my ear
    My mind’s awakening
    Torn out of my sleep
    Grasping for meaning

    Words from a woman
    Giving me advice
    Leaving me a riddle
    How to apply this to my life

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    cheronld commented on A Whisper

    04-26-2011

    Dark and delicous...the devil is in the details...love it...Cher
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    MootPoint

    04/26/2011

    This is a quick one. It captures the feeling I had the morning though. Don't forget to read By the Wind. -thanks much :)

    Krystle commented on A Whisper

    11-02-2010

    This is wonderful! Love it well done! Will be reading more of your work. Thanks for sharing.
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    MootPoint

    11/03/2010

    Yes, please read more. You might like "By the Wind" Thanks for the comment. :)

    MarionYost commented on A Whisper

    09-08-2010

    I like it :) I can relate... Or, at least I can relate to the meaning I got from it ;) Nice. All the best -Marion-
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    MootPoint

    09/09/2010

    I wish she would tell me more what to do. Thanks sweetie for the comment. :)

    Maleficent commented on A Whisper

    09-01-2010

    that was me... calling to the Creatures of the Night, lolz! ;) seriously... this is a very interesting dream that seems to say live while you can then jolts ya outta sleep to kick start yer day! write on! ;)
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    MootPoint

    09/02/2010

    So it was you. Now the truth comes out. Are you stalking me again? lol ;-)

    knight4696 commented on A Whisper

    08-07-2010

    Dreams have a funny way of telling us things we should already know. To not take loved ones for granted, To listen to our inner self, etc .. Now if we can only remember them when we wake .. Great thought provoking write! :) Ken
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    Poetry is not an expression of the party line. It's that time of night, lying in bed, thinking what you really think, making the private world public, that's what the poet does.

    Allen Ginsberg (1926-1997) U.S. poet.

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