The Night’s Breath Is More Liquid
©dah©dahlusion
To read this poem, look for my forth-coming second book
due in late-summer 2011 from Stillpoint Press.
contact: www.mystillpoint.net.
Thank you,
dah
The Night’s Breath Is More Liquid
28 Comments
©dahlusion
To read this poem, look for my forth-coming second book
due in late-summer 2011 from Stillpoint Press.
contact: www.mystillpoint.net.
Thank you,
dah
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Springsize commented on The Night’s Breath Is More Liquid
09-28-2010
- aaaaah, a poem of fantasy / imagination ... I would hope... and not one of a bad mayonaise sandwich sitting too long in the sun, producing delusions of being the one who walked on water... [ok, that is my silly of the day]... I like your description of winter coming, bringing the winds of change, moving dust from the grounds and cobwebs from the mind... a short poem, but filled with the view of sky and crow, as night nourishes the air and all it touches, with more moisture than summer dares to dream upon this spot of the Earth....
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10/01/2010
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danmartyjake1 commented on The Night’s Breath Is More Liquid
09-22-2010
- Exquisite wording, simple but luscious detail. I love reading your thoughts. I have missed your poems. Thanks for doing what you do. Smiles!
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09/22/2010
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Marsink commented on The Night’s Breath Is More Liquid
09-18-2010
- I wonder if your personage, bodily shared in that liquidity, in that, your stroll took you across the water. Whether, by foot or mind's excursion is unknown, but your passage is punctuated wit the simile and add solidity to the ironically, water-borne allusion. The night's breath is a deep contemplation which will prod me onto a plain of more imagination of its mysterious affectation. thanks for sharing a drink of water in the evening breeze! Applause building!!
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09/19/2010
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Teardrops commented on The Night’s Breath Is More Liquid
09-15-2010
- I feel the kind of night air here and you have done it justice with your creative poem . Welcome back you have still got the touch Marie
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09/16/2010
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Chaos128 commented on The Night’s Breath Is More Liquid
09-15-2010
- Seeing transcendent events in everyday occurrences is a rare gift. The ability to describe those events, and do them more than justice is... priceless.
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09/16/2010
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