Invisible

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    Invisible
    I could not sleep
    imagining it must be raining
    There is darkness inside these clouds

    I have come to know this feeling
    this obscured emptiness

    All night there is nothing

    but my breathing

    and there is a nebulous death
    that happens between breaths

    The sky bends around me
    touches the trees
    and knifes its way between the branches

    I stand in the cold air
    as a child stands in winter’s whisper
    snow angels freshly painted
    and pinned to the ground

    It seems that there is still
    something
    that I need to say
    to support this melancholy
    to bear witness to the sorrow
    the world owns

    Could this darkness be a god
    that takes me to the other side
    where what’s left is
    invisible
    Tonight the moon is unseen by
    its own absence

    How many more thoughts
    must I make
    to understand the entire world
    to understand the grief of some
    the joy of others

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    This poem was first published in ‘Acumen’ Issue 84 (United Kingdom)

    From my fourth book 'The Translator'

    published by 'Transcendent Zero Press' 2015

    ©dah / dahlusion 2014
    all rights reserved

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    toredbloodink commented on Invisible

    12-29-2016

    I find your words , they bring the reader on a journey as you would want... The meaning never what we as writers share the only thing we share the most.. They way we feel the words write the words and place them cause they are a piece of us... So the reader may never get to the depths of our thoughts feelings and place of mind and physical blending beyond our own belief to the rhelms of a creative side that all of us have... Great write again my friend
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    dahlusion

    02/26/2020

    Thank you, T, and your critique is an honor to receive. Cheers, DAH

    Crush commented on Invisible

    08-02-2016

    i just back recently. had a really hard time for a couple of years submitting and being read. good to see and read your words again !
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    dahlusion

    08/02/2016

    Nice to hear from you, and thank you! Yes, life can (and will) beat us up from time to time. Peace and Light to you –-))

    Tempy commented on Invisible

    07-24-2016

    So say it. Hey missed everyone, they full blocked me, couldn't access the site at all :( till today
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    dahlusion

    08/01/2016

    Tempy! ––))

    Poetry is when an emotion has found its thought and the thought has found words.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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