The New Moon

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    The New Moon




    This night, there will be a new moon,
    Anxiously I await, throughout the afternoon
    For this evening when the sunlight dies,
    Your spotlight will shine bright in the midnight sky
    More beautiful by the moonlight you are, I surmise,
    Moonbeams shine down and swim within your eyes
    As you dance beneath the starry night,
    Waxing and waning as your words you recite
    From this distance I can hear you in waves,
    But my wish, is to look upon your face,
    And it is the feel of your touch in which I crave
    For it is the distance which leaves me feeling dismayed
    But on the night of this new moon,
    In the sky I will seek Visions of you
    So tonight when you peer to the heavens above,
    Embrace the moon in which I speak of
    And I will be staring as well, waiting on you,
    This night your spotlight awaits your debut
    And in that moment we transcend space and time,
    Together we’ll melt, it will be sublime


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    lunamarie commented on The New Moon

    06-07-2010

    hmmmmmm ... a new Moon on Monday ... giggle ............ Luna
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    angel33614 commented on The New Moon

    05-18-2010

    INCREDIBLE IMAGERY! THE NEW MOON REPRESENTS THE HOPE FOR A NEW BEGINING, MAJIC UPON THE LIGHT OF THE EVE. IN A TRANCE CONSUMED BY THE LIGHT OF THE NIGHT YOU SEE THE PURITY OF AN ANGEL'S SIGHT. A VISION OF TRUE LOVE, TWO SOULS JOINED BY THE LOVE OF ONE. YOU FEEL TO THE CORE OF YOU BEING THAT THIS OTHER SOUL IS OUT THERE DREAMING INTO THE MOONIGHT, SO CLOSE YOU CAN HEAR HER BREATH, YOU CAN FEEL THE CARESS OF HER TOUCH, YOU CAN SMELL THE FLOWERS OF HER FRAGRANCE. YET SO FAR AWAY IN THE NIGHT OF THE MOON... YOU YEARN FOR THE VISION OF HEAVEN TO BECOME THE LIGHT OF REALITY, TO SEE, TO FEEL, TO TOUCH, TO SMELL IN REALITY. FOR TWO SOULS TO BECOME ONE WITH THE DREAM OF THE NIGHT'S MOON. THERE IS SOMETHING MAGICAL ABOUT THE LIGHT OF THE MOON, MANY DREAM TAKE FLIGHT TO THE VERY CLOUDS OF THE HEAVEN AND TO THE FAR STRETCHES OF THE ETERNITY OF THE STARS... GREAT, GREAT WRITE... TRUELY POETRY IN MOTION OF LIFE. PURITY OF THE SOUL, JOURNEY WELL!!! ANGEL
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    ginga commented on The New Moon

    04-17-2010

    SuSpence, I love celestial poems anything with planets , sky, clods, this one is certainly a pleasure with superb rhymes. ginga
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    BDIsernhagen commented on The New Moon

    07-31-2009

    wonderful work, poeticly spotless! great weaving metaphore and imagery. I wrote one like this, "woodland wild" or something like that. 10.
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    latinangel commented on The New Moon

    07-28-2009

    I think I just found another favorite poet. You are a very talented writer. You creativity is awesome. i'm so sorry I didn't read you before. Would you forgive me and by my friend? This gets another 10 from me and another addition to my favorites. Awesome poem.
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    Poetry is not an expression of the party line. It's that time of night, lying in bed, thinking what you really think, making the private world public, that's what the poet does.

    Allen Ginsberg (1926-1997) U.S. poet.

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