Ode To My Love

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    Poem Commentary

    This is lyrical re-write to Bob Dylan's 'Buckets of Rain'

    Ode To My Love



    Swallower of pain
    Robber of fears
    You're, the kind of thief, i've been waitin' on for years
    My heart, is yours now, so there's no need to steal
    You've got the kind of lovin' honey baby
    That can heal

    I can be shy
    And try to disappear
    But your, love resinates upon my heart, and brings me cheer
    Love can come, and love it seems can go
    I need you more than ever baby, we'll make it last
    And keep it slow

    I love your laugh
    And your, funny ways
    And the, way you correct me when I, miss a phrase
    You're my best friend, and you, do it so well
    You give me that good lovin' but honey baby
    I won't tell

    I close my eyes
    And I, see your face
    I smile, and offer up a, warm embrace
    You get loud now, I can always, feel your breath
    You're so hot sweety baby, you can always
     Make me sweat

    You are my light
    Baby, you're my sun
    My day, seems meaningless 'til our, time's begun
    Lost in your magic, i'm completely under your spell
    I love you soo much, honey baby
    Can you tell?

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    Olan01 commented on Ode To My Love

    10-23-2010

    A wonderful love poem and the structure, well-- beautiful. Well done.
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    Embraced commented on Ode To My Love

    10-09-2010

    WOW! I couldnt wait to see what the next thing read in this one! 10 form me, Spense! E~
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    Springsize commented on Ode To My Love

    08-31-2010

    Your first verse is excellent and grabs Fast, the attention, Neon smooth and each verse is an easy song. really nice to read in poem form and know you're experiencing these feelings ... so if one could not go to Switzerland, you have shared the wondrous Swiss alps of high expressions, and one may spend a wisp of a vicarious moment there ... and the picture is tender.
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    DrewMcNee commented on Ode To My Love

    08-18-2010

    A rich warm expression of what many men seek. I'm sorry for my late arrival to this. Drew.
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    Mandi commented on Ode To My Love

    08-07-2010

    REsonaates? wow, this is a new style for you. Sounds as if something is afloat... Is this your heartbeat I hear?
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    Poetry is when an emotion has found its thought and the thought has found words.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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