Lost am I

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  • Love

    Lost am I

    Your eyes are like a looking glass

     

    I climb inside to my delight,

    I find your mind, spends its time,

    Keeping me in sight

     

    Your mind an endless cavern

     

    I search for thoughts of me,

    Nestled away, I find a cache,

    Among the strewn debris

     

    Your smile, so inviting

     

    I smile back at you,

    You’re beauty I swear, is beyond compare,

    Soaring high I become lost in the blue

     

    Your touch like white hot heat

     

    You stood in nothing but your pelt,

    Unfastening my belt, remember how it felt,

    To swim in the pool of my hearts melt

     

    Your laughter so contagious

     

    Like music to my ears,

    The sound so divine, travels my spine,

    And within my memory adheres

     

    Your absence so overwhelming

     

    I am perplexed as to what to do,

    As our love grew, I knew it would be true,

    Lost am I, without you


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    feathershal commented on Lost am I

    05-27-2010

    very nice. very nice indeed. I really enjoyed the rhythm of this one.
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    simoneaugustus commented on Lost am I

    04-26-2010

    WOW! Fantastic writing, beautiful imagery and style. What a lucky girl! Every woman wishes someone would write about her this way and even though this was for someone I don't even know, it took my breath away! Phenomenal! And definitely being saved to my favorites ;)
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    Musicmynded1 commented on Lost am I

    04-13-2010

    Good stuff here suspence.... glad u made ur presence known.
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    paxtruth commented on Lost am I

    04-13-2010

    I like the single lines between verses alot. The pictures you have with your poems are super nice.
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    HopeOhlarik commented on Lost am I

    04-13-2010

    very nicely written. emtotion is nicely storng enough yet soft and gentle. good job!
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    Poetry is when an emotion has found its thought and the thought has found words.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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