Procrastination
Love is like a Castle encircled by a moat
You must find that one way special way in before you get sucked into the tar
And once you do, you must draw up the bridge,
and lock yourself in forever.
I'll finish the rest tomorrow....
Procrastination
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Love is like a Castle encircled by a moat
You must find that one way special way in before you get sucked into the tar
And once you do, you must draw up the bridge,
and lock yourself in forever.
I'll finish the rest tomorrow....
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Chaos128 commented on Procrastination
12-02-2010
- Ha ha Kinda like building your bridge while you're crossing it, ain't it? Nice work if you can get it. If anyone can get it done, it's you, bro. Let us know how it comes out, and don't keep us in... ah... never mind X D
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raziel69 commented on Procrastination
08-07-2010
- humor and love, two of the best feelings in the world. this is the first chance i have had to read this, guess it was a good think i waited...10
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DrewMcNee commented on Procrastination
08-05-2010
- I've been meaning to comment on this but I haven't got round to it. Drew.
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cheronld commented on Procrastination
07-29-2010
- You have a colorful way of putting certain things my friend..."love is like a castle circled by a moat"....Ok....lol....but I do like the part about drawing up the bridge....short and sweet with a whimsical beat...ok...did I just rhyme...lol....Cher
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SavVySam commented on Procrastination
07-27-2010
- You've got a wonderful quirky sense of humor! This is just great Spense! Procrastination visits here so often we had to start sending out round tuits!;)
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