The Baby

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  • Childhood

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    And not to be outdone, here is a journal enrty from my son. It must have been shortly after his sister arrived(!)

    The Baby
    i hate the baby,
    I love the baby,
    I am the baby,
    Wahare is the baby,
    (where)
    I mover in the gabig,
    (I moved her in the garbage) 
    eating on a wish bone
    so i can make,
    a wish
    sile baby you,
    (Smile baby you)
    have to eat mush,
    time to eat chunch,
                   (crunch)
    yeks!
    hving a baby
    is harder than 
    i thout

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    Musicmynded1 commented on The Baby

    12-10-2009

    Nice piece, reminds me that somewhere i have this whole thing written around txting and teens doing this action and stuff,,, i'm gonna have to find it and post it. (did u type it all this way purposely or were there really errors at first?)
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