Full Moon Blues

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    Once a month, when the moon was full, we would wake up the kids at midnight and take them out for a walk. In the winter, it was especially beautiful with the snow reflecting the light of the moon. My daughter still hates me for it, but my son still loves to walk by the light of the moon.

    Full Moon Blues
    Long shadows from reaching branches

    Gnarled forms bent and twisted

    Casting crooked shadows

    On glittered indigo snow

    Confetti from heaven

    Scattered in loose snow

    Full moon on high beam

    Frosting the night

    In starkest full moon blues 


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    SavVySam commented on Full Moon Blues

    12-18-2009

    A beautiful family tradition, your kids will probably love reliving in years to come...(even if it is to gripe...)lol Very nice piece!
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    redbloodink commented on Full Moon Blues

    11-28-2009

    this work is so true.... that's how the moon can leave us to feel.... warm and fuzzy or cold and alone.... Ty for sharing Red
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    Rygar commented on Full Moon Blues

    11-18-2009

    a portrait of a winters night, the imagery gave me chills.... :) nice work hun
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    Ralph Waldo Emerson, American Poet (1803-1882)

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