Summer Love

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    Sorry it's been so long, I've been busy with the start of school. Hope this makes up for it!!!

    Summer Love

     I fell for him in summer
    my mystery in love
    The boy who stole my heart
    our love as fleeting as a dove.

    He hid himself away
    truth veiled behind his eyes
    While telling empty promises
    and broken shattered lies.

    He led me out of reason
    and into his embrace
    Of cold and lifeless arms
    with our fingers interlaced.

    And then he left
    without telling me goode-bye
    And the truth came crashing down
    like the heat of mid-July.

    Of course it does no good
    to dwell on broken dreams
    So we move along in life
    all the while,
    Ripping at the seams.

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    Marsink commented on Summer Love

    01-23-2011

    This is a relevant love to have had and lost, either by choice or unwillingly, its matters not. You write in a clearity that reveals soft intention and painful regret: you drew me in by sharing this Summer Love! thanks for being a heartfully skilled writer! Applause builllding!
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    Poetry is not an expression of the party line. It's that time of night, lying in bed, thinking what you really think, making the private world public, that's what the poet does.

    Allen Ginsberg (1926-1997) U.S. poet.

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