Dance of the Seasons

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    Read a book where there was a dance of seasons that took place before winter and summer and the season elementals were real, and it got me thinking.

    Dance of the Seasons

    Lady Summer and
    Winter prince,
    dancing together
    ever since,
    The dawn of time
    of seasons too,
    of lazy heat
    and weather cool.

    Seasons change places
    in time with them,
    to and fro
    and back again,
    She blond and bright
    with smile warm,
    he with hair of white
    and a ruling arm.

    And so its been
    and so shall stay
    to balance
    freezing nights and sunny days.
    For if this dance
    should suffer plight
    we would be plunged
    into eternal night.

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    OutcastAmber commented on Dance of the Seasons

    11-18-2010

    Fantasic, the way you wrote it is just pure great. I can not discribe how good it is.
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    MindNumbing commented on Dance of the Seasons

    10-08-2010

    This is a very cool concept, shadow... personification of two opposite seasons as dancing lovers is just brilliant... well done!
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