Heartbreak

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  • Lost Love

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    A journey of heartbreak that ends with happiness.

    Heartbreak

     In her room she sits alone
    refusing company.
    Silently she sobs
    trapped in misery.
    Her spirit is now broken
    her heart is torn away
    Because of one dumb guy
    who wasn't worth the pain.
    He doesn't even know
    and if he did he wouldn't care
    Because now he's found another
    who he says has got more flare.
    But soon she'll be over him
    and with another guy
    Who'll treat her even better
    and won't feel the need to lie.
    Now she's having fun
    and hanging with her friends
    Now he's hurt and hollow
    like he should be in the end.

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    sunshine33710 commented on Heartbreak

    08-10-2010

    Wow he sound like a real jerk, I am glad that you got away while you can,he is the one who got hurt in the end but that is his problem and not yours anymore. I really liked it that was very serious words.
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    Teardrops commented on Heartbreak

    07-31-2010

    Your are the lucky one you got out before he broke your spirit . Loved the poem Marie
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    Rhymer commented on Heartbreak

    07-31-2010

    Troubles of the heart, we have all been there. Glad to see justice served in the end.
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    dahlusion commented on Heartbreak

    07-26-2010

    beautifully poetic sadness with such imagery and passion, bravo!
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    kdarcy commented on Heartbreak

    07-26-2010

    Relationships can be a roller coaster ride no matter the age. We sometimes don't even know what makes this happen, but if we look closely ... we usually jumped too quickly, our wants, needs and desires too great to resist. Nice write for its length, like the circle effect of what comes around, goes around. be well
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