A Forgotten Friend

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    IMPORTANT!!!! I DO NOT OWN THE FIRST TWO STANZAS! I got them from a book and added onto it. I unearthed this from a long time ago, just decided to post it.

    A Forgotten Friend

     She sees the world
    through others' eyes
    The only colors
    black and white.

    She looks upon
    a shattered youth
    The mirror of
    a broken truth.

    Beauty and poise
    grace and care,
    She gently waltzes
    through the air.

    A goddess perhaps,
    Or a friend from a hidden past.

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    kdarcy commented on A Forgotten Friend

    10-23-2010

    " The mirror of a broken truth ", great line to a good work, thanks for sharing, be well k
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    abuelita1 commented on A Forgotten Friend

    10-23-2010

    Very nice write. Enjoyed it. Made me smile.......and smile again. Thanks for sharing.
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    Kanicki commented on A Forgotten Friend

    10-17-2010

    Good write enjoy the read....beautiful. Peace and Light.
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    Troy commented on A Forgotten Friend

    08-19-2010

    a very good write lyerical and enchanting my thanks for sharing
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    ApaqRasgirl commented on A Forgotten Friend

    08-19-2010

    that was a beautiful write dear. loved the way your words told the reflected truth..........great write.......love asha
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    Poetry is not an expression of the party line. It's that time of night, lying in bed, thinking what you really think, making the private world public, that's what the poet does.

    Allen Ginsberg (1926-1997) U.S. poet.

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