Night and Day

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    So I know it's not up to my usual poems but this was the first poem I wrote, and so I decided to post it.

    Night and Day

     Night will come and swallow day
    in a very predictable pattern.
    Much like a hunter, eating its prey
    but in the end it doesn't matter.

    Because soon day will come again
    and glorious light will follow,
    While all that is left of the darkness
    are the cool and distant shadows.

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    Charlie23 commented on Night and Day

    08-11-2010

    I love the idea's and the way you portray them in your poetry! You have great style and talent! I enjoyed this one!
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    trocka7 commented on Night and Day

    08-05-2010

    Brilliantly put! I really really loved this poem, you are very talented! I have one that is a bit like this, it's called Sunset Salutation, check it out if you like! Thanks for sharing this!
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    ShadowStealer

    08/05/2010

    Thanks for the recommendation, much appreciated!!! As for me being talented, I just get lucky sometimes. Keep writing! ShadowStealer

    DeepEclipse commented on Night and Day

    08-03-2010

    Harmony through paradox. I could write poetically about night and day and never get tired of it. The balance man, the balance :) Good poem, cool picture. Reminds me of the struggle we do with ourselves.
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    ShadowStealer

    08/03/2010

    Thanks eclipse, I feel like you really get my poem and It means so much to me anyone has that much understanding! ShadowStealer=-)

    Poetry is not a turning loose of emotion, but an escape from emotion.

    T. S. Eliot (1888-1965) American-English poet and playwright.

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