Raised By the Faeries

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    I felt like starting a new manuscript about a changeling child raised by faeries, but turned it into a poem instead!!!

    Raised By the Faeries

     I am a changeling child
    with flowers in my hair
    You want to meet my family?
    then I will take you there

    I live with sprites and pixies
    with nymphs that sing to me
    Among the blue lagoons
    with maiden of the sea.

    So why have I no wings,
    or glimmering shimmery skin?
    For I am a changeling child
    and these are not my kin.

    They took me as a babe
    before I changed and grew
    But I am not the only one,
    because now you're one too!

    You'll be quite happy here
    and soon you will forget
    The life you lived before
    filled with sadness and regret.

    So now let's go and play
    with Puck and Oberon
    Among our newfound family
    your old life is long gone.

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    SavVySam commented on Raised By the Faeries

    08-06-2010

    There is wonder and fantasy to be found on your page! Love this latest piece...great work!;)
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    trocka7 commented on Raised By the Faeries

    08-06-2010

    Lovely poem! I enjoyed it quite a lot, and I LOVE the picture! I have a strong affection for faeries and nymphs and all nature spirits, so this was wonderful to read :)
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    Rhymer commented on Raised By the Faeries

    08-06-2010

    This is a fantastic write about the faeires and sprites, an enjoyable light read.
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    Poetry is either something that lives like fire inside you or else it is nothing, an empty formalized bore around which pedants can endlessly drone their notes and explanations.

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