ROSES FOR YOU

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  • Lost Love
    • SecretPanda8491
    • Taking a break from bathing and loving my puppies. Still have nine adorable little furry babies to love until they go to their new homes.

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    I was so in love with this man,  the relationhip was short, and I was so devastated when it ended. I couldn't understand, and still don't affter ten years, why he ended it. I did what I could to show him I loved him. I cried for weeks, and vented on paper. Still tho I long to see him, to know that he is ok.  

    ROSES FOR YOU

    ROSES FOR YOU

    What have I done to send you away,
    And what could I do to convince you to stay?

    As days turned to weeks so slowly it seemed,
    I think only of you and our pushed aside dreams.

    I walk through our garden under skies so blue,
    Tears run down my cheeks as I yearn for you.

    I whisper your name remembering days gone by,
    I fall to my knees covering my face as I cry.

    My heart is so empty as I look around,
    I imagine your arms-lift me up from the ground.

    We walked in the garden and laughed our way through,
    I gather up roses in arms meant for you,

    Strolling then pausing to pick a red rose,
    My heart is so wishing that you were still close.

    I’ll take them to town and wrap them in blue.
    I am sending these roses my darling to you.

    By
    Martha Sue Carr

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    Poetry is not an expression of the party line. It's that time of night, lying in bed, thinking what you really think, making the private world public, that's what the poet does.

    Allen Ginsberg (1926-1997) U.S. poet.

    SecretPanda8491’s Poems (14)

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